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Crash Landing (2005)
IMDB rating: 3.10
Plot: A private flight for a billionaire’s daughter and her friends becomes a hellish ordeal when the plane is overtaken by a team of terrorists, plotting to hold the billionairess hostage. But there is one thing the hijackers didn’t count on - Major John Masters, who is also on board. Within a matter of minutes the situation spirals out of control, resulting in a wounded pilot, several dead, and a severely damaged plane. Now, Masters must somehow land the plane on a small Pacific island despite a category five hurricane if they hope to survive-that is if Captain Williams and his team can finish the runway in time…
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Directors: Wynorski Jim
Actors: Lieberman Adam,Barash Brandon,Beck John,Brown Randy,Clotworthy Robert,Dalesandro John J.,Dobson Kevin,Eastin Steve,Grimes Adam,Kraljevic Ivan,Logan Paul,Pare Michael,Purnick Steve,Rivera Rene,,
Thoughts on the plot for the sci-fi novel I'm writing?
OK, so it starts out as two seemingly unrelated story-lines and two different stories. Then the story-lines unit to form a third story. Please for forgive me. I have a lot to go though. I honestly thinks is actually rather brief.
The first is this:
There is a planet somewhere and the people are much like the native americans of yesteryear. Aliens to themselves have come to visit and they are much like the europeans in that they trade and such. But soon things start to turn sour. My story takes the prospective of a girl from a small tribal village deep in a forest. On their travels they find a young boy just about to be captured by one of the aliens. They kill him and the boy shows then what has happened to his village.
Once they get back from the prisoner boys, Village the older boy, who’s father happens to be the chief of his village, tells his father about what he has seen. His father, becoming rich from trade with the aliens disagree and wonders why they would ever do such a thing. After that they go to investigate some more and they find a damaged ship of one of the alien commanders (Gwent). He is seen as a turn coat amongst the aliens’ ranks and his ship was shot down because of him being critical of what they where doing to the planet. He agree to help the children since he too has had bad experiences of the evil empire.
And my seconds story is as follows:
Back on Earth a girl (Sandra) has just moved to an island in the middle of the ocean somewhere. She is unsure of how she got there and doesn’t remember much about her past life. People are made to believe she is from england but she doesn’t remember much about england. She starts out at a local high school where she makes some friends. 3 of her friends, 12 boy and 2 girls, have a Special connection to each other. She notices how the boys eyes change colour when the girls touch him and how the girls, who are very popular in the school, still hang out with such a quiet rejected boy. The trio get to know Sandra but then she suddenly disappears. They then begin to find out that when Sandra was in england she had been abducted by aliens; the same evil alien empire from the first story. They find out she is being used as a scapegoat so the aliens can investigate the Special bond the trio have as the boy apparently isn’t human even though he looks it and his father is (he has no mother).
The boys father can usually be seen thanking the girls for looking after him but doesn’t reveal why he is different until later. That fact is the girls give the boy power and when he finds his true potential for the first time (when he beats up a school bully). After finding his hidden power he meets with the gang from story one as the crash land on earth because the evil empire has put a limiter on their ship.
This is the 3rd story:
The army comes along and rounds everyone up and at the barracks Sandra mysteriously shows up again. She is holding a plasma gun and she goes on to try and shoot everyone. She is defeated though they let her live because of the fact that she was abducted. She comes around and gets her old mind back. When they go to her house the find a note addressed to Gwent the captain form story 1. It is written like the anticipated him to come here and they say he doesn’t have long to live.
They soon discover Sandra is actually an orphan with no belly button (important because no belly button=no true parents). After which they head off to meet with most powerful man on Earth who agrees to help them. They get some human recruits who strive to help eventuqally getting Gwent’s ship fixed.
This might be a 4th story:
They can head off in search of other would be rebels across the evil empire. Traveling though the stars they loose 1 of the girls in the trio and it is part of a trap to lead the young boy away from the rest of the gang. She is cpatured by some spies of the evil empire. This does have its intended purpose but at the same time it leads everyone to the emporrer of the evil empire and there is an epic battle between him and Gwent. The emporer disappears but people start to agree Gwent that it is time for change and they hail the start of a new era.
Its cool that you start out blending history and the future, moral and wrong, evil empires,heroic teenagers and how new human tradition is to others like aliens. Its entertaining and intelligent at the some time. It captures the reader. Its very good, great imagination. I hope it turns into a book, and seems like the kind of reading material that could continue into a series. Perhaps you could start the kids of young, and they could grow up with the story? Or maybe they could be old, and grow young? All the best, I’m really looking forward to reading it. Perhaps you could also get someone to help you on the layout and flow?
| Nov 19, 2009
Well, it sounds good so far. I found myself wanting to know more, so that’s good. I honestly read the whole thing you wrote so that’s good too. The worse si-fi book I ever read was called Bikini Planet, as long as it doesn’t end up stupid like that, you’ll be fine.
Emerald T. | Nov 17, 2009
I would love to read it. The plot sounds like an Andre Norton book, but with more depth like Heinlein or Asimov.
jl | Nov 17, 2009
Dude, it could be a really interesting story if you plan it out properly, if you don’t go for a whole implausible ‘teenagers saving the day’ thing that could happen if you cut corners with the plot, and, if you forgive my bluntness, improve your spelling and grammar a great deal. Work hard and make it the best you can. You won’t ever regret it.
Spacedogg | Nov 17, 2009
I think it’s good and that you should go through with it. I’d probably give it a shot if I found it at a bookstore.
Argyr | Nov 18, 2009
